Tuesday, November 18, 2008

More Poetry

The Kiss
Intensity swirling dark and light through my mind.
Emotions are deep and breath is shallow.
Cocoons burst open, revealing beautiful butterflies in my stomach.
The feeling is too great and too soon.
Kindness, passion and friendship can be felt more through it.
However, it all ends too quickly for your lips are no longer on mine.

I wrote this when I was 19 years old for my ex-husband before we were married. This poem was the first non-depressing poem I was able to write in my entire life. I thank him for that.


Unknown said...

It's a beautiful poem :^)

Laura said...

such a nice poem

Anonymous said...

the last part made me sad:(

Anonymous said...

I love poems!!! how deep

Anonymous said...

brilliant writing!

Anonymous said...

you were only 19 y/o when you wrote that? geez you were really in love!

Anonymous said...

That's so sweet!

Real Live Lesbian said...


Chunks of Reality said...

Thank you everyone for your kind comments. They really mean a lot and you all mean a lot to me.

Welcome new visitors to the blog. I'll be making my rounds to your blogs this Thanksgiving weekend.


Chunks of Reality said...

Oh, and by the way, leidyundercover, I was also very immature then. LOLOL

OMG your comment made me giggle. :)

Thank you for the smile.

Chunks of Reality said...

RLL - I tried visiting your blog today and don't see that you have one? I thought that you did?

I would love to visit!! Please let me know.

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